爱意

我的脚趾 在沙滩上 挥了一挥
上面字迹 温暖了心 温暖了你
空中淡香 是一种幸福的回想
鸟儿轻唱 有了春天的画像
你卧在怀里和BABY一样

你呼吸的惯性被迫于
微弱的气息改变憧憬
在爱你的字迹填上个句点
在春天的画像加上冬季的寒意
你卧在怀里熟睡不在起。。。

The above gives the extremes in life that we all encounters at some times of this journey. I have always been very entrigued by the extreme contrast of things in the same time dimension. That is where in the same particular period of time, the exact opposites can results.

The above words tells a romance between 2 young couple basking in the springs of love. The first verse paints a very loving and beautiful picture that they were experiencing. However, i added a third line which i was hopping would be able to bring a hint of the things that will happen in the end.

2nd verse paints the extreme opposite of its former. Her breathe weakens, the little sentence dot ends the beautifuls words that were soken initially and Spring time has been littered with the chills of the winter cold brought through by the passing of the lady.

I would like to share these:
1) i did not put in the emotions of the guy because i would actully wants the reader to put themseleves in the shoes of the guy and feel the poinancy and extreme sadness brought about by the passsing. One could actually be in a shock and react nonchantly or even so overcome by emotions that no words cannot describe the impact of the demise.

2) The passing of the lady need not have to be seen as it is. It could be many things as well. The passing of a romance that will never come by again, the passing of dear one, the passing of an oppportunity, the passing of a gathering... All this would mean the extreme lost of "x" that may never come by again...

The thought of lossing something and never will we be able to get it back again, is really the cruelty the world bears upon us human beings. Why give us feelings if all we could feel is pain...? All however is not so bad as the loss is balance by the beauty that happened initially. The love and joy that springs brought gives reprived to the world we are constantly embeded in. The lack of expression of feelings from the guy may also be due to his expectation of what is to happen the very same moment. Or it sould be the lack of my personal experience that i was unable to related the feeling to you all. This feeling is one things i hope i never be able to expressed...

PEACE LOVE AND MORE OF THESE...